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no saving us

She'd always been the cautious one, the one who thought things out. He, on the other hand was being reckless in this as he was in most things. She watched, with some disdain, as we jumped excitedly from seed package to seed package. He was looking at the fronts, the colourful pictures of cabbage, or sunflowers, or pansies, without stopping to read the backs of the packages. He didn't realize the importance of the months they were best planted in, what plants they went next to, or even how much each strain cost.
"Hon," she started, "Do we need fertilizer, or vermiculite, or..." "Don'

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rainrain pours and soon washes away pink chalk on cement. so does k stop loving b? rain
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fairfair
She came down the stairs. A hard and serious look on her face.

"Can we talk?" she asked
"K." he replied, eating another handful of chips, eyes never leaving the puck.
"No, really, now." she said. Already it was easier; it was always easier to be angry than hurt.

"Yeah, commercial in two seconds."
She went back upstairs and sat on the bed.
Three hours later, he came up, asked her if she'd seen his green shirt. He had asked her to wash it, remember?

"Can we talk?" she replied.

"Yess," he said, dragging the 's', rolling h fair
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no saving usShe'd always been the cautious one, the one who thought things out. He, on the other hand was being reckless in this as he was in most things. She watched, with some disdain, as we jumped excitedly from seed package to seed package. He was looking at the fronts, the colourful pictures of cabbage, or sunflowers, or pansies, without stopping to read the backs of the packages. He didn't realize the importance of the months they were best planted in, what plants they went next to, or even how much each strain cost.
"Hon," she started, "Do we need fertilizer, or vermiculite, or..." "Don' no saving us
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wanna carrot?She was being obnoxious. She had started with the apple. Munching it while playing on her laptop, letting the juice go down her face and wiping it with her sleeve. And every time that he thought that the endless parade of crunchy healthfoods were over, she'd pull out something new. The trailmix wasn't that bad until the end when she held the bag above her face and shook the last remants into her mouth. She tap-tap-tapped away at the laptop, crunch crunch crunched away at the food.

He wondered if she knew that the second button down on her tightly patterned dress was open and that everyone could see the place on her bra where the wanna carrot?
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Mon Feb 9, 2009, 8:38 AM

So. I have to pick the things I like best / think are the most well done, and send them off to be evaluated and to determine what I'm doing with my life next year. I'm so freaking nervous about it, and far too scared to ask anyone I know in real life to help me, (I hate when people I know personally try to 'interpret' what some story or poem means about them... sigh.) So, if anyone stumbles upon this, and thinks something rocks or sucks, I'd seriously appreciate the help. I'm too close to all my work to pick. Much thanks to anyone that does. <3

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Current Residence: canada
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Interests: writing, photography, emo, work, university, outdoors, my dog, reading
Favourite movie: kill bill vol 2, the lion king
Favourite band or musician: bright eyes, beatles
Favourite genre of music: emo, classic rock
Favourite artist: conor
Favourite poet or writer: rand, orwell, auel, wyndham, palaniuk
Favourite photographer: me
Favourite style of art: photos
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Wallpaper of choice: the compy changes it for me
Favourite game: monopoly/scrabble/legos/risk
Favourite gaming platform: wii
Favourite cartoon character: Zim, Pepe le Pew
Personal Quote: to love and to be loved; let's hope that is enough
Tools of the Trade: mechanical pencils

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~TheBlackParade400 Feb 9, 2009, 8:37:35 AM

I love your stuff =]

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...It was a lie when they smiled and said you won't feel a thing...

~maria-tulfe Oct 26, 2008, 3:55:26 PM

you have a great style and it would take me a lot of work and practice to get to the level of short-story writing you can achieve. your stories all seem to have a point, even if it's just to get across a character's personality. that's very difficult to do in a short story - zero in on the point. i can write poetry but short stories are something i don't try my hand at. you are an amazing writer BECAUSE you can write both prose and poetry. kudos and hope to see more writing from you! <3 have a great day.

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_{you are the only thing that makes me want to live at all / oh, when i am with you there's no reason to pretend / that when i am with you / i feel flames again / just put me inside you / i would never, ever leave...}

~RaynUzamaki Nov 2, 2007, 7:19:35 PM

I love your poems! They remind me of how I feel all the time, but in a good way, it makes me smile knowing that someone can share the same feelings as I have.